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有人发起了翻译竞赛,重在参与.想和大家磋商,所以先抛砖引玉,把一个不成熟的翻译先贴出来,过几天也许还改一改.翻译有意译和直译,由于不太懂英文的诗歌写作,又想保留原文意思,所以就直译了, h% m& n b6 ]+ O: N
,.清晨,急匆匆的走过安静的街道。Early morning I am walking by the quiet street in a hurry.
4 c+ ^) W6 X) j8 Z8 r零星树叶的飘落,松鼠开始了忙碌。Partial leaves fall down everywhere, squirrels are busily running .
: @) ^: C0 @1 g/ H% a现在的我,一如一年前的那个我。同名同姓。The current I, the same as one year, the same given name , and the same family name.
! k( q7 U7 U# ]0 F梳相同的发型,背同样的背囊,不苟言笑。The same hairstyle, the same bag, reserved laughing and talking.
, J6 `' U3 W. R- r+ _- b7 `眉眼间却似乎多了什麽,又少了什麽。Seemingly added something in my eyes, or lack something.
. ^8 ?; C3 y F! S1 y4 h! \夏天过得那麽快,我几乎遗忘了那些个汗津津的夜晚。Summer went so fast, I almost forgot those sweating night.
; {) K! Y* L0 o+ z0 j4 p( R猫儿们在炎热的时候常常彻夜在窗外乘凉,追逐打闹。Cats were often playing the whole hot night outside windows to get cool.( B$ _( G* X2 j/ ?7 ]* z2 g
就像多年以前的我们,似乎也是如此天真的肆无忌惮。Like us many years ago, mindless self indulgence.2 J! P- J! n c' C
我常常在入秋的时候怀念夏天,I often cherish the memory of the summer and those people that make me riant even I am in a very bad state of mind when the autumn is coming以及( L `* R# q% N0 S
那些在最烦躁时想起也会微笑的人们。
/ {3 i" k! T& M- u$ V* ]世情缘无非是梦 The emotion and the carma only is a dream.$ u/ q" N8 s) V9 M3 c* y J
昨夜温存不该的相逢 That shouldn`t happen to meet each other last tenderly night.- @4 u! t! [6 c. C, z8 S
想要忘记又不忍放弃 I want to forget it but can`t bear to give it up.
, f! t8 y/ ? k8 d+ A% q最怕爱上像你这样冷漠又温柔的人I am afraid of loving the person like you who is inhospitality and also mild.
, H7 B; M0 G- Y4 g寂寞世界谁来靠近 In this lonely world whom I can step inside love?
/ W9 n) N* U. Q- e醉过之後身边冷清清intoxicated then feel cold.
) Q+ D. O- F8 l, Q7 ?迷路的心没方向的云The labyrinthine heart is like the cloud with no direction.1 W( e/ B" y# Z! y: F+ d
最怕拥有这样似有若无的感情I am afraid of most having the emotion that seems to have but not really have.% P) `/ I5 [$ Z
多情人都把灵魂给了谁 The amorous men to whom you gave your soul?
+ F" |9 W8 g$ o+ y0 IWhy I am always hoodwinked!为何眼楮总是蒙了灰' ….
, D# a8 [6 K! }" ~5 J5 m多少次小心翼翼告诉自己I have told to myself many times cautiously1 r3 y- W, I! R, E) y
不要坠入痴情的轮回 Don`t fall into the spoony whirligig.
% {" B! {1 m0 f; z+ P多情人总让伤给灌醉The amorous women always get drunk by desolation, % O& i8 ]2 b1 I2 v5 O
为何潇洒一点都不会Why can`t I take it easy?. f x, r$ c! b
多少爱恩恩怨怨换来今生How endless tears that got in return for kindness and enmity!$ P0 e6 D. c( U* W, a. c6 W A
永难平息的泪* c& [7 B% J5 }9 P
每当夜深人静时,When the quiet night comes+ W* u' G% s; C
~我的眼前常常会泛起你的身影。Your figure usually appears in front of my eyes.
% ?* I! ~6 W( G7 E# S" {# D' g( ~当你看到我时的那一声问候The greeting when you met me mad my heart in touched unaccountably.* V8 X' E. W& }+ d% z/ _
让我的心里感到一种莫名的心动,
1 b- [1 F" }6 k你的yours of a smile, a gesture and a piece of words genialize my current disconsolate heart and soul
4 }. Y) u- Z8 l一抹微笑;
2 X2 N5 W. |/ J一个手势;6 N2 m: q* y1 |$ N
一片话语,
; o$ V- O/ Y* c1 _# D% V; A愉悦著此时我惆怅的心灵、
- }" n8 I9 F4 y/ }" v+ A0 n明亮著我漆黑的角落,The moon lights the dark corner5 A- `, G6 t% K1 Y0 E B
心里总能感觉到点点温馨。I feel a bit of cozy.# v1 {6 r3 W: c$ L
这一瞬的爱恋,The deeply attached to you in a twinkling( _$ c8 n g; S+ K/ u8 z
也许是一生一世的最亮点。maybe is the most light spot in my whole life..' c* y) _9 Q; _ s, C/ I L* L
起初,对你的出现,I didn`t cherish your appearance at first,& x$ b% D1 ]( f
我并不以为然。- z1 N6 q3 N6 t+ ~* I3 R/ M
可随著时间的流失,but accompanying with the time passed 4 m- X& X8 d i6 s+ B, u; W7 ]
慢慢的不知不觉中,I am bounded slowly and unconsciously by the emotion .
G4 Z$ |% T) ^% P被一种情绪所左右,7 J6 }9 o$ W. ~/ W" [; W
总感到一种难 以名状的朦胧的喜悦。 always feel joyful indistinctly and nondescriptly .
5 c& q9 c5 \2 E5 F% N即不问你是否喜欢我,Without asking you if you like me and if I like you6 ~. a: o; u6 h/ H2 h7 w6 `
也不问我是否喜欢你,
$ A; Z& f: ?: W4 q+ p- l对你的存在只感到亲切,only feel gracious for your existing.. |. Q. U* b+ j% A
只希望能为你做点什麽。 only want to do something for you& Z7 A+ b- m- J& _
3每次有意无意的遇到你,every time when I meet you
) D# S/ y _2 p+ X心中都泛起丝丝柔柔的喜悦。The sweet joyous heart isn`t tranquil
# a+ ?0 H; {1 p7 w4 `然而我真真切切地知道,but I really know your figure only become a kind of atmosphere 7 j2 O+ ?! R1 Z# Y' r
你的身影已化成一种氛围,1 @/ c( ^ V6 Z( }: z
记在我的心间。That lives in my heart.
# c- r* l# I3 O( j$ h$ ? F& ^你知道吗?Do you know your name can suddenly come into my mind at anytime! 3 U$ e N j, y/ [$ z0 j. _
随时随地我的脑海里会突然涌现你的名字; W1 }; W& u, N
哪怕你某个转身时飞扬的衣角even only your flying clothes corner when you turn aroud,
, N" s" K3 d) C. t O一种声音,and your voice
( O6 L5 E5 D! @- o0 u也让我柔柔的有了心痛make me gently distraught with happy feeling.2 b) ~. E* s0 S) s1 I
掺杂著幸福的感觉。
$ o2 d- e. ?' f" |" @4 O与你相识的那一幕幕,the scene that meet and know you prinkle in my heart like the snow on the land
3 @2 w3 M$ P) A& E) }- N象雪花般撒落在我的心田,
: N- q9 ^3 J6 q; c4 K) M# v倾刻间,suddenly flurry that all are the love to you.
; c" t4 |' X" w% s- s纷纷扬扬开来──全部都是对你的爱恋。
2 W% a6 X- @, g/ K' B: h& v你知道吗?Do you know that is happy there is a person who is worth to miss
1 {1 `; Y: \- S有一个能够让思念的人,2 y8 l. W$ A, P2 X2 J/ |) T
其实也是一种幸福。
1 Z# d% z, l, C& W* k% a尤其是在这样的日子,especially on the day, the gentle sea wind and the sweet summer.
- m6 M5 V% } l5 t柔柔的海风,( U1 W& b$ Y2 e, o K( x- F
甜甜的夏天。1 X5 G0 K& z& [$ z$ u
一扫那一缕如烟如缈的忧郁,Sweeping out the smoke and indistinct gloomy
9 v, s: j) r# ]2 {8 w只是静静地等待你的身影,only waiting for you quietly.- k2 ?1 B% C" g0 ~! @/ X
仅仅让你知道有那麽一个人,Just let you know that there is a person who wants to have the same love knot and the desire as you do.
9 Q+ o$ V) G- f. }想和你有共同的情结,: I0 V' s M2 r
共同的心愿。
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- Y& J5 M: f& q4 L! k5 _好想与你在细雨中漫步,I really want to ramble in the small rain with you9 H2 s7 _1 z% Z7 p- _
一同感受著春雨的洒脱,and to enjoy the rain washing together
: J, S0 i7 d% W5 [! h或是赶著看一场电影;or rush to a film
$ \" v& J, e& u: L* }或是静静地聆听一首曲子,or listen to a music quietly.
, b) x- W+ Q" s, }0 }: o『多情人都把灵魂给了谁』whom did you the amorous person give your soul to ?
4 P+ B( f) k& n& W5 }我们相拥旋舞,然後双目相视。We embrace and dance and then gaze to each other, 1 i" D5 X8 J! Y
浅浅一笑,smile or gently kiss then say “ I really love you”
( l& f$ O1 x1 z4 P或是轻轻的一吻,
' C/ n5 { P/ b5 C# [再对你说∶『我真的好喜欢你』) z# @9 h9 m. D6 s* @3 V- I, W
就足够了. That is enough.
0 s1 \$ Q7 E2 c. H$ S, J这也许是千年前就悄悄播下的种子,Maybe this is the seed that planted a thousand years ago! + H) p0 v- B) p
终於在这漫长的季节里深深地植下了根,finely it deeply rooted into the earth in this season and sprout.
& C! G. v3 _6 r |& q萌出了芽,& Y, v9 R) o B# i! K
一如对你的思念,the same as my missing
2 A2 t; L) [5 T浅浅地泛著那一点点新绿。It comes a little bit of verdure.
! @/ b9 l2 Q: p如果,如果有一天,If , if some day I can touch of your hand T' z2 I% T$ \* ?/ D s
能够牵著你的手,
$ a1 r) H# m/ x! T那麽,我愿把全部的眷恋都放到你手心里,then I will put all my attachment on your hands/I will be sentimentally attached to you completely.
5 t2 `; _8 c' Y, a让你细细地触摸,Let you touch me slowly and read me carefully.
4 w9 |: n% P9 C; u! H" A& V慢慢地细读,
& x" B6 f' ]- c我将用整个心去感觉你手里脉脉的温柔。I will enjoy your mild emotion though your hands with my heart and soul.
4 Q0 o$ c: ^7 t' _5 `在你对我伸出手的那一瞬,At the moment you reach out your hands to me
) l% p# {0 m3 J, m& e B% y我就拥有了世界上所有的关怀与热忱,then I will have all care and ardor / e' y5 w. Y6 i' B+ D
就让我牵一次你的手,好吗?Let us walk arm in arm , OK? |
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