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I just wrote a poem" P2 r# {0 M V. B! ^8 J1 }
Besides, I'd like to put it in my blog.
. S7 g$ F7 I: r' c: N! hHowever,first of all, is anyone able to modify/improve my poem {7 p0 Y/ j0 x8 T! h2 ^# k/ h
Thanks a lot!!!
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Formerly,Somehow I'd fallen in love with you
6 ?8 G& ~& f" q* H0 Q Somehow I'd found something wrong with us
! z$ O P- c7 j7 d. X) A Somehow I'd left you to travel around the world
. y/ [* Q; d) ?/ G1 J Somehow I'd attempted to forget everything between you and me & e+ R) E @* x! I# W
Somehow I'd considered you'd been lost in my mind & ^ t7 k# z; N$ f& ` z1 w
Somehow I'd felt that my real life was full of happiness ) w8 g8 i# |: |0 n
However, somehow I casually got a dream of you yesterday
. F+ H4 l/ a6 `# e somehow I realized you were still in my heart 4 A# \0 e. W$ d. Z, G) r; u
somehow I recalled my memory of you with powerful uncontrollable consciousness
: C! ~9 V, E5 x( c# k# w; `& D somehow I lost myself inside again
j0 P5 q3 n+ _Now, somehow I write down the aticle in my blog , e% \4 z4 k" `7 T( J: C" Y2 K
somehow I find that my heart is calling for love and devotion
: o+ R" U9 a; T7 I3 E% X) i, i$ rFinally, I discern that I am still in love with you......................................
1 G9 ?# r+ @- W" L7 [& D9 D, B* K! cBasically, I almost finish this poem5 I: n O$ O4 H4 f, d- i2 C& |
I am 一个人de精彩
# @' ]) ~ H# f I am thinking to use 精彩 to cover everything.
; _, {1 W! `3 H7 G+ eBut........
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